Hedging

Academic texts are most frequently characterised by a desire to avoid making claims and statements that are too direct and assertive, since academic discourse is often about theories, conclusions drawn from evidence, exchanging viewpoints, and so on, rather than hard, indisputable facts. Therefore, hedging (making a proposition less assertive) is very important in academic styles. Less often, it is sometimes also necessary to assert a claim or viewpoint quite directly and more confidently, a process we shall refer to as boosting.

Hedging and boosting are principally realised through modal expressions and through the use of simple tense forms. We also examine the role of adverbs and other constructions in asserting (boosting) and hedging.

Formal hedges employed in academic writing

about generally relative to
according to (+ noun) likely roughly
apparent(-ly) merely seemingly
approximate(-ly) most (+ adjective) slightly
arguably nearly somehow
broad(-ly) normal(-ly) somewhat
clear(-ly) partially sufficiently
comparative(-ly) partly surely
essential(-ly) potential(-ly) theoretically
evidently presumably
typically
fairly probably
unlikely
frequently relative(ly)
usually

It was, arguably, the strongest leadership the department had ever had and it used its resources well.

They are both from roughly the same period in the middle of the sixteenth century.

Yet, seemingly for Bakhtin, though material forces no doubt exist, what determines that we know about them at all are intersubjective human relations.

Common prepositional phrases and other expressions used as hedges include the following.

as a (general) rule

broadly speaking

generally speaking

in a sense

in a way

in most cases / in the majority of cases

in principle

in some senses

in some respects / in many respects

roughly speaking

Survey researches have as a rule understandably preferred to make use of established diagnostic categories, rather than have to develop their own new ones and then try to persuade clinicians to accept these.

[critique of a collection of political essays]
Thus the essays were, in a sense, out of date when they appeared, yet the cultural tradition which they articulate and to which they contribute remains a part of the German scene to this day.

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Formal hedges not employed in academic writing

actually more or less
anyway more
in a way pretty
kind of
something like
lots of
sort of
maybe like

 

Informal lexical hedges are often considered inappropriate in formal academic writing, although individual instructors may be somewhat flexible with regard to their uses. According to Kay (1997), lexical hedges includes prepositional modifiers of nouns, verbs, and whole sentences that are particularly vague and mark a shortage of factual information or knowledge. For example,

*Before this turning point in the history of industrial production, everything was sort of undefined and sporadic. They just ran production using their own intuitions with a more or less successful manufacturing. ...As a result, lots of creations could not be accomplished. This kind of working didn't hurt companies because there were not many competitors to share the market.
*This summary more or less encapsulates the thesis advanced by Glynn in his new and wide-ranging history of arms races and arms control.

The uses of such hedges as sort of, kind of, or lots in a formal academic assignment may actually create an impression that the writer is only vaguely familiar with the subject matter and is unable to cite specific information to make his or her text credible. The prior excerpt demonstrates that the student has a general idea of the history of industrial production, but did not make much effort or take the time for an in-depth study of the material.