The Title

It is often difficult to come up with a title that is both striking and true to the content of the text to follow. Throughout the production of the text, a range of possibilities will present themselves to you. In determining which of these possibilities should head the finished product, you should select the one that both catches the eye and ‘hugs the content’: how this is achieved will be explained in the following paragraphs.

Characteristics: short, understandable & neutral

That titles are short is true for writing in general, but much less so for academic writing. This does not mean one should not pursue brevity. One way in which brevity can be achieved is to avoid including in the title any description of what kind of text is to follow. Thus, titles such as the following should be edited back to their essence:

*Study of the influence of the political essays by Mark Helprin on contemporary politics.
Helprin's influence on contemporary politics

Similarly for: An Investigation of, Some Aspects of, …

The requirement that the title should be immediately understandable follows from the fact that it plays such a major part in helping the potential reader decide whether he will or will not read the text. If a title fails to provide a context, explicitly or implicitly, and does not orient the reader towards a particular subject matter within that context, there is a certain chance that the reader may nevertheless be intrigued and will read on; but in the case of argued prose, there is a much greater chance that the reader will dismiss the text as fanciful and unbusinesslike.

Focus structures: jumping the queue

Indeed, in these days of international and immediate electronic access to texts through Internet and other forms of computer-based bibliographic searching, writers are under increasing pressure to produce unambiguous titles, so that potential readers can with confidence select texts relevant to their needs.

The third observation about effective titles is that they should be neutral. It is counterproductive to confront the reader with your opinion in the title –after all, why should he believe you? it is much better to offer, as outlined above. an indication of the field of inquiry (the Theme) placed in a recognizable context (the Frame). This is why titles do not generally appear as full sentences, since a sentence expresses a proposition, i.e. a judgment. Titles are not designed to express the result of the thought process underlying the text: rather. they offer a starting point for the reader's task of reconstructing that thought process on the basis of the information presented within the text. Thus titles such as the following are inappropriate headings:

*Analysis of the Works of an amazing author: Mark Helprin
*Britain is Going to the Dogs

Much better would be:

Aesthetics in Mark Helprin's oeuvre.
Recent Developments in the British Economy

Although sentences that express a judgment (declarative sentences) are not suitable titles for argued texts. sentences that ask a question (interrogative sentences) are occasionally effective as titles. Since every question suggests an answer, titles in the form of a question tend to be less neutral, hinting at a possible conclusion without of course stating it. To give an example: where the context is the desirability of extending the European Union. the focus is on Poland, and your intention is to claim that the time is not yet ripe for Poland's entry, a title like the following would be quite suggestive:

Ian McEwan's "Atonement": balancing on the edge of Ethics?
Hemingway's "In our Time": Novel or Short story cycle?

Function

Titles perform two functions:

  1. they create the context within which the text proper will be relevant;
  2. they announce the topic.
It is a good idea to ensure that the title contains two elements, each corresponding to one of these two functions. There two elements we shall call the Frame and the Theme. The Frame indicates the general area to be dealt with; the Theme delineates the sub-area to be focused on. In this way, the reader’s interest is awakened by the Frame and stimulated by the Theme.

Structure

One effective way of structuring titles is to present the Frame, followed by the Theme. The two elements should then be separated by a colon:

Frame: Theme
Mark Helprin: Metaphors in Swan Lake

This ordering has the effect of gently introducing the reader to the field of reference and then concentrating his attention on the issues to be discussed. One thing to bear in mind is that the Frame:Theme structure sometimes may lead to ambiguous titles, such as

Ebershoff’s Pasadena: a study of intertextuality

One may be inclined to think that Ebershoff's Pasadena is actually a study of intertextuality, which is rather misleading. Another technique is to present the reader immediately with the Theme, and then contextualize it with the Frame. Such titles are generally less forceful than Frame: Theme titles, but have a kind of descriptive coolness which is often suitable for argued texts. Here a colon is not appropriate. Rather, the Theme is linked to the Frame by a preposition such as of or in:

Theme of/in Frame
The Life and work of Mark Helprin
Intertextuality in Mark Helprin's "Winter Tale"

Sometimes, the Frame refers to two ideas, and the Theme is the relationship between the two. Here the Theme can be left implicit by simply presenting the two elements of the Frame, linked by and:

Frame 1 and Frame 2

Mark Helprin and Jewish Literature

Sometimes, where the relation between Frame1 and Frame2, is not obvious. the title will be more appetizing if the Theme is also mentioned:

Frame 1 and Frame 2: Theme
Thomas Pynchon's Vineland and Deleuze and Guattari's capitalism: revolution, the body and the American state